Sunday, 13 November 2011

Started at last

Yippee I started my NanoWriMo novel tonight - a bit later than I anticipated with us nearly halfway through the month but will try do as much as I can.
Been busy getting drunk what with my birthday ect - but I a RSA stage 2 touch typist so shouldn't be a problem once I get on a good roll - which I did tonight but broke of as getting tired - lol

I will be putting up the first chapter in a couple of days!

Thursday, 10 November 2011

Thirty Five!

Well just gone 35 - don't feel any different (yet) lol!

Although because I been partying a bit and seeing daughter I still hardly done any NanoWrimo!
I need to really get into this now!
The plan is hopefully to be a published author by the time I hit the big 40!  So five years to go then!

Preferably would like to be published by 37 but with financial mess the world in it will be harder to acheive as publishers will take less risks on new authors!  But will see how things go!

In a few days will put up what I've done so far for NanoWrimo and maybe another old short story!

Cheerio

Tuesday, 8 November 2011

The Landings

Here's a short story I wrote a couple of years ago for another short story competition for SFX Magazine although at the time I never finished it until I went back to it earlier this year.
Hope you enjoy - The Landings -


I remember the landings clearly, as if they had only happened yesterday.  It was a spectacular event of two races coming together for the first time.  What made it even more astonishing was that neither race knew the other existed.

It was an accident really, but one that was destined to happen especially with all the signals being beamed into space by both races and eventually after decades of signals being bounced around the vastness of space they found one another.

There was excitement on both planets as the first messages between the two spoke of peace and unity and a sharing of knowledge.  It changed the lives and attitudes of both planets and their own beliefs too.  Now the people of both worlds knew they were not alone.

On Earth there was a universal bonding of religion as what was preached before was now generally regarded as void.  Definite life from another world was all the proof needed that the old religions had got the past wrong.  Although there were some devotees to their cause who described what was happening as evil and still preached their old ways.  Wars stopped on both planets and a time of peace ensued.

After many communications and messages between each other the decision between the leaders of both worlds was to meet on planet Earth.  This was agreed because Earth wasn’t as advanced.  Although all the communication took place over ten years the news of what was said was exciting and Earth shattering.

Eventually the big day finally arrived.  Excitement and nerves were at the forefront for everyone and every race.  Two races would at last meet and this was a big day for me as well.  For ten years I had been looking forward to this,  seeing a new race in the flesh.  When news of communication was known the first thing I did was join the new Space Corp which was set up to train our people in handling interspecies contact.  We learned of what the new planet would look like,  the customs and rituals of the alien species.  My parents were dead against it and tried to persuade me not to join,  “You might catch something horrible from them!” shouted my mother as I left home.

But here I was at the forefront of it all.  Everything on Earth went to a standstill as people tried to get to the major cities of the world to catch a glimpse of the new arrivals.  There was pandemonium in the streets as thousands upon thousands were squashing into the relegated meeting zones.  Giant televisions were set up so people could get a better look.  Camera crews were everywhere broadcasting it live to the people who stayed at home, some through choice because they were fearful and others were too poor. 

Hyde Park was the landing spot chosen in England and there would be ships landing simultaneously in all the other capitals of Earth.  Washington was the capital I was at on that day.  I remember it so clearly as it was the best day of my life.

The President of America was there waiting with his party and with them thousands of people watched as clouds gathered above then dispersed as a bright blue light from the circular silver ships descended.  The excitement and fear hung in the air as the giant saucer slowly landed and everyone waited for the huge silver doors of the ship to open.  I couldn’t wait for the doors to open and come face to face with a new species.  Sweat poured down my head as the seconds seemed like hours.

Eventually the huge silver doors slowly opened and I saw the humans in the flesh for the first time.  Their look of horror and surprise will be with me till the day I die as they looked onto our tall gangly bodies which will seem so different to the humans as we have bone on the outside to protect our organs and so makes our superior race harder to be killed.  You could also see the humans surprise when we started shooting our laser cannons at them disintegrating their soft watery pink bodies.

This was the moment I had longed for. For over ten years we had wanted to destroy the human race as is the nature of our people.  The smell of the human flesh as it melted under our lasers was divine and the screams of the dying only fuelled our excitement.  We chased after the humans shooting at them evaporating them without mercy.  Even when the human army retaliated with their puny guns and tanks they were no match for our armour and shields.  We destroyed the human’s tanks and planes as if they were mere toys.

High above the sky a second wave of our ships descended and destroyed the Earth’s buildings and airbases.  Eventually there was hardly anything left as we swarmed down to the planet and killed anything in sight.  The humans didn’t stand a chance – they mostly screamed and died.  There were too many of us.

This was a very special day indeed for me as well as my people.  It was my first time off world and what I had trained years for.  It was the first world we had been in contact with for over a hundred years and we needed their resources and minerals badly as our planets fossil fuels had almost ran out.

With our superior weaponry, shielding and strength we killed all but a few hundred thousand humans within a matter of days.  The attack was non-stop as we bombarded the city’s.  The humans that we kept would be used as slaves to mine the planet for us and maybe eaten if not too skinny or disease had not set in.  It was the best experience a young warrior like myself could have and within three days the Earth belonged to the Gorgons!!

Further Entry:

This morning as we prepared to leave the Earth after nearly a year of sapping it of its minerals and water and leaving it a lifeless planet,  news has reached us that our home world has had communications with a new planet.  I can’t wait to go there.

Been Lazy

Hi guys - all three of you - lol  Hope you are all well?
Karen could you send some more followers my way? 
I've got an Writers and Artists website account I think will update with my blog address - the other writers I have seen on there have blogs also and sites to visit!!

Well got to confess been bit lazy - suppose to be doing NanoWrimo but not even started yet!
At the begininning of the month did well as wrote alot of notes for the novel I going to write but not finished them yet and don't like starting a novel with incomplete note - do you think I should just start it and jot down notes on the go?

Anyway - going to start tonight after finished blogging - will put an old story on here for you to enjoy in the meantime!
Enjoy fans! lol

Tuesday, 1 November 2011

Halifax Libarary

Well good news for Halifax I suppose as in tonights Evening Courier it announces a new fancy pants glass look libarary!
Fantastic! just hope they don't get rid of the old one turning it into a new scratty pound shop or demolishing it then just before they start building on the new one they say sorry because of the cuts can't have another!

Maybe I just pessemistic but with all the libarary cuts up and down Britain and cuts in general I hoping it isn't the case and they do make a new libarary!
Even though I not a member I still like to use it for writers workshops, readers days plus it's good for the children too, not enough can read or write properly as it is!
Rant over!!! LOL

Karen, Dawn and Paul am I on your followers list now?  Check if your blog is now on my site also under blogs I read!   Neil

Monday, 31 October 2011

Daisy - Halloween Story

Well below is the Halloween story I had read out at the Writers Group and it was actually for someone else for a competition at work - which won - nice bag of sweets is a start - lol
Hopefully you will see an improvement from Bloody Sunday - will be posting my next short story which I wrote after Bloody Sunday soon - keep em peeled and enjoy . . . .

Daisy



Daisy didn’t believe in ghosts!  Well that’s what she told herself as she sat huddled in a tattered duvet looking around the big dusty old room.
It wasn’t like she had seen or heard anything it was just an eerie presence she felt, her skin was cold as if she had stepped outside on a frosty morning.

Your being silly she told herself, your twelve now too big for all this scared silly nonsense. 
She realised it was a bad decision accepting a sleepover from her Aunt Cassandra, but she hadn’t seen her since she was a toddler.  If it wasn’t for her Aunt calling her over in town she wouldn’t have recognised her.

Well here she was sat up in bed twiddling her long blond hair. 
She suddenly felt drained like she had just finished a school race.

Better text Mum again she thought.  She had been trying to get hold of her all night but either the calls were unanswered or there was no signal.  She wanted to let her know where she was.

Mum did u get voicemail met Aunt Cassandra staying at hers over nite
luv u x d

Daisy put her phone next to her in bed in case Mum returned her call!
She started to doze off her eyes shutting!



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Bang, bang, bang!
Daisy shot up awake there was banging on all sides of the room. 
She peered into the darkness and a shadow of what looked like a man was by the bottom of the bed. She screamed.

Daisy ran, out the door and down the stairs to the front door – as she unlocked it and stepped out something grabbed her arm but she daren’t look back.
Outside she saw her Aunt by the gate.

She thought it odd that she was there but relived to see her.
“Something inside – ghost” she screamed.  Tears running down her cheeks.

“It’s ok your fine with me” replied her Aunt.

As they walked back inside Daisy’s mobile vibrated – she read the message from her mum.

Stop playing games Daisy – your Aunt Cassandra died six years ago.



Monday Club

Well been to another enjoyable Writers Group Meeting with the Cleckheaton Writers Group and the gorgeous old building that is Cleckheaton Libary - how come I want to be a writer but can never spell libary right!
Had a spooky old time with Karen - the head of the group and Paul as we swapped our spooky halloween themed stories. 
We also traded information about writing competitions and news and Paul read out an extract from Karen's novel The Pall Bearer which was really good.
Anyway I will be posting links to their Blogs and Dawn's blog if anyone wants a nosy!

Goodnight - shattered!